Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Wonderful Writing by Year 3 and 4 Students

That was the Beach

Remember when...

You were lying on your red swimmer's beach towel
listening to the water lapping gently against the rocks.
Watching squawking seagulls swooping and diving for fish.
A salty breeze drifted gently past your nose as it cooled your skin,
which was sticky from the melted sunblock you had plastered over your lazy limbs.
Your tongue licked your lips, tasting the saltiness of the sea.
That was the beach!

Written by all of Room 12, Year 3

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