Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Wonderful Writing from Year 3 and 4 students

Awesome Sounds and Smells

I love the sounds and smells of,
Huge waves crashing into the grainy sand
Sizzling sausages on the rusty, old BBQ
Cricket balls suddenly being whacked
Fresh, chocolate muffins in my lunchbox
Wheels from skateboards screeching in the bowl
Awesome sounds and smells!

Jordan
Year 4
Room 15

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