Monday, May 17, 2010

Wonderful Writing from Year 3 and 4 students

Autumn

Fuchsia, golden, rusty brown, lime green leaves scattered everywhere.
The cold breezy wind chills on my pale face.
A colourful blanket lies sleepily on the frosty ground.
The autumn leaves float soundlessly in the air like butterflies.
New leaves appear happily swaying in the breeze.

Kathryn
Year 4
Room 20
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2 comments:

  1. LinleybMay 17, 2010 at 10:20 PM

    I love your writing Kathryn. I could feel it as well as read it. Clever work.

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  2. AnonymousMay 26, 2010 at 1:05 AM

    What a wonderful piece of writing Kathryn - well done. I loved the imagery you used. Jeanette

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