Tuesday, June 1, 2010

Wonderful Writing from Year 3 and 4 Students

Mum

Her eyes are hazel like pure brown.
Her hair is silky straight.
Her lips speak out the nicest words,
like Dad who loves me too.
Her ears are soft as petals of roses.
Her nose is a button who shines so bright.
I love my Mum 99 million times,
just how I love my Dad.

Eden
Year 3
Room 13

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