Thursday, June 3, 2010

Wonderful Writing from Year 3 and 4

Autumn

A group of leaves are jostling on the muddy ground.
Umbrellas protect you from the cold wet rain falling from the sky.
Trees are losing their multi-coloured leaves.
Under the trees I see blending leaves swirling and twirling down.
My Mum makes the best hot chicken soups.
Nothing left on the barky trees.

Hayley
Year 3
Room 14

2 comments:

  1. I will be pleased when the leaves stop falling to be honest as they are making such a mess all down my drive and over the paths!! They look very beautiful but they are very slippery!!

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  2. i love this piece of writing

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